I liked the power in the flow, had some good meaningful lines and ya showed how ya felt it was real... The rhyme scheme was simplistic, but ya used multies and some internals, not bad rhythm, noticed some parts were choppy though... The wordplay was aight, here and there, more metaphors woulda put more depth in this, and you should try explore that... Vocab was working sometimes, liked the strong words put across and that helped with bytes of imagery, but I didnt like the "Fucc this, fucc that"... Thought it was a bit overdone... Otherwise a decent and solid spit, good subject matter... Keep spitting and elevating...

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