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Old 08-28-04, 04:44 AM   #14
Spektikul
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Voted For: Trooper

Opener - Trooper, Drag's sounded like he was just tryin to rhyme to hard.
Closer - Neither, I wasnt really feeling either of them.
Punches - Trooper, Drag wasnt hittin hard today.
Personals - Trooper (Drag on line), Drag didnt have any.
Metas - Tie, Both had several good ones.
Multies - Tie, both had 1 in their verse, even tho Troopers were harder...Tie.
Structure - Trooper (10/10), drags was unorganized.
Vocab - Trooper, Drags most tech word was constructor, and he spelt it wrong.

As you can see ^^^ Trooper took this one due mostly by hard punches, an amazing opener, crazy mad structure and very good vocab. Props man, that was actually a good verse to read...I really like it.

Drag, your a good guy, no hate on this man...I just didnt feel like you came out to win today, just my opinion, I guess will see how the votes tho. I think for areas of improvment...Structure, personals, and vocab. Work with those and youll be on your way to merkin katz... Props to both by my honest vote will have to goto Trooper...