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DRAG~ON 0 0%
Trooper 5 100.00%
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Old 08-26-04, 02:41 PM   #1
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
Trooper vs DRAG~ON

IP: D135 D6AF

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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EXPLAINED VOTES OR NO VOTES
it aint that hard people

3-0 is K.o

Minimum posts to vote: 180

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Win by 3-0 KO
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Old 08-26-04, 02:42 PM   #2
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Old 08-26-04, 02:56 PM   #3
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3 vote 4 ko i won ya rhymes is 'shit'
cuz 'Trooper' is a 'pooper scoopin' ass son of a bitch*

if u was a construtor n ya rhymes bricks u couldn't
build a house/
we catch 'fade' n im da 'barber' so im 'cuttin' u out**

open ya mouf wide n get down on ya knees
diss nigga Trooper take my 'pipe' 2 his lips den 'crack pheans'

n diss ya last scene i blast em trajedy he exploded
from takin 'green pills' but 'Keanu Reeves' can't get his ***
'MATRIX Reloaded'/


*pooper scoopers pick up shit
**barbers cut hair a fade is a hair style
***ya kno dat
 
Old 08-26-04, 02:58 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by DRAG~ON
3 vote 4 ko i won ya rhymes is 'shit'
cuz 'Trooper' is a 'pooper scoopin' ass son of a bitch*

if u was a construtor n ya rhymes bricks u couldn't
build a house/
we catch 'fade' n im da 'barber' so im 'cuttin' u out**

open ya mouf wide n get down on ya knees
diss nigga Trooper take mo 'pipe' 2 his lips den 'crack pheans'

n diss ya last scene i blast em trajedy he exploded
from takin 'green pills' but 'Keanu Reeves' can't get his ***
'MATRIX Reloaded'/


*pooper scoopers pick up shit
**barbers cut hair a fade is a hair style
***ya kno dat


don't get it don't vote
 
Old 08-26-04, 07:46 PM   #5
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Old 08-26-04, 08:00 PM   #6
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Drag Nuthin Bout u Reads "Elevation" ~~ No where Near Mines
U couldnt come "Strong" if u poured Spinach on ya Punch Lines

Your Not Associated with Any Females~~~Dix Luver u Gag~On
Attach Ya "Testicles to A Pickup"~ Now thats really a Drag~On

Your Intelligence is to Irrelevant~In ya Sig Statein you on Fire
Only Cuz you got Burned Like Magic Johnson before he Retired

Listen to Hakeem and "Dream" your 6-6 Your an ~"Imposter"
U couldnt "Win" if you was on ~"Phil Jacksons 96 Bulls Roster"

*Magic johnson got burned aka he caught aids*
"Phil jackson coached the 90's chicago bulls wit Michael Jordan*
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Old 08-26-04, 08:09 PM   #7
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This was feedback posted for Trooper

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juss lookin but trooper won in my opinion but im not voting
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Old 08-26-04, 08:12 PM   #8
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Voted For: Trooper

trooper got this one...his punches hit way harder, and he had better and more personals...some nice shit i seen in there, very creative...i bet it dont take you long to write 8 lines huh?

drag-on, the first bar was shitty...and the rest of yo flow was just aight, you gotta come better than aight...you had a nice flow, with a couple of punches, but i think you lost...


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Old 08-26-04, 08:15 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for Trooper

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dragon.. one advice.. elevate bro...

Your Not Associated with Any Females~~~Dix Luver u Gag~On
Attach Ya "Testicles to A Pickup"~ Now thats really a Drag~On


that line was a ko.. no re kk thx
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Old 08-26-04, 10:40 PM   #10
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Old 08-26-04, 10:59 PM   #11
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nice drop Troop can we get
sum honest votes ya
 
Old 08-27-04, 02:00 AM   #12
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Voted For: Trooper

Ok this was fairly easy to vote on. Trooper got it in every way shape n form. Drag~on you need to spend more time on typing well.. Some parts of your drop were pretty hard to read.

The disses could of been much better had you used correct grammer. Vote definatly goes to Trooper though.
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Old 08-27-04, 08:19 PM   #13
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thanx 4 da vote can we get sum more
honest votes ya
 
Old 08-28-04, 04:44 AM   #14
Spektikul
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From: Canada
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Voted For: Trooper

Opener - Trooper, Drag's sounded like he was just tryin to rhyme to hard.
Closer - Neither, I wasnt really feeling either of them.
Punches - Trooper, Drag wasnt hittin hard today.
Personals - Trooper (Drag on line), Drag didnt have any.
Metas - Tie, Both had several good ones.
Multies - Tie, both had 1 in their verse, even tho Troopers were harder...Tie.
Structure - Trooper (10/10), drags was unorganized.
Vocab - Trooper, Drags most tech word was constructor, and he spelt it wrong.

As you can see ^^^ Trooper took this one due mostly by hard punches, an amazing opener, crazy mad structure and very good vocab. Props man, that was actually a good verse to read...I really like it.

Drag, your a good guy, no hate on this man...I just didnt feel like you came out to win today, just my opinion, I guess will see how the votes tho. I think for areas of improvment...Structure, personals, and vocab. Work with those and youll be on your way to merkin katz... Props to both by my honest vote will have to goto Trooper...
 
Old 08-28-04, 06:40 PM   #15
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thanx 4 ya honest votes ya
Troop i want a rematch sumtime soon
 
 


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