props to both battlers on this one but here's the verdict

edubz-decent wordplay, nice multi usage, but your structure was a little off tho as i was reading it. but i'd give your verse a 7/10

pictureperfect-your structure was ok, but i can't stress enough, that corniness is not allowed on the battlefield, and your verse was full of it. the parents just don't understand line, was beyond corny. You gotta go at this seriously, or if not serious, then something sharp and funny you know, a below the belt funny diss. But not these corny lines. and i got onto this battle cuz you put in complaints that he didn't throw a single punch and you're losing. Nobody did you an injustice, you just didn't come serious enough, and dubz does have punches. You need elavation, no hate.
4/10

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