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Old 08-29-04, 03:55 PM   #11
Magic5
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Voted For: Tha Flash

Tha Flash
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is decent.. flow fell off a little.. decent multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

CeRtIfIeDtHuG
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is pretty good.. flow falls off a little.. no multis.. no good wordplay.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
CeRtIfIeDtHuG had the better structure.. neither had a good flow.. neither had good personals.. Tha Flash had more multis.. better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Tha Flash gets my vote..

VOTE - THA FLASH