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Check in by: 09-01-04 at 02:35 AM

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Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 02:36 AM.

CeRtIfIeDtHuG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 02:36 AM.

Nigga When It Comes To My Rhymes U A Plastic Doll,
I'll Box Ya Ass Up And Leave U Stacked In The Mall//
U Don't Want It With Me I'll Leave Holes In Ya Fitted,
And Have Ya Self Esteem At The Stature Of A Midget//
U Claim To Be Philly Bred,
But Ya Ass Ran Into A Phone Booth And Tried To Become A Star Like Bill And Ted//
U Better Off At Home,
Cause My Heater Will Leave A Hole In Ya Head Like The Top Of A Sky Dome//
I'm Hoping To My Throne,
And Ripping Ya Face Off When I Win You'll Wanna Switch Places Like Face Off//
U Need To Elevate Ya Game Cause Ya Low Like When An Airplane Takes Off,
And I'll Leave Stiches On Ya Head Like U Was A Baseball//
So Nigga Don't Step To This,
Cause I'll Have Ya Head Spinning Around Just Like The Exorcist//
Or I Can Brake Ya Legs And Have Em Tied Up Like A Pretzel Twist,
And U Ain't Even A Certified Thug//
I'll Leave Mud Tracks On Ya Face Like A Dirty Rug,
Nigga Why U Gotta A Picture Of Tupac//
I'll Let Ya Brain Drain Out But Only From Two Shots,
I Had A Feeling That U Was Feminine On The Inside//
I'll Leave Ya Head Bouncing Like Hydrolauics On A Pimps Ride,
Nigga This Shits Been Over//
I Just Kept Spitting Until It Felt Right So I Could Get Some Closure

R U Gonna Put Ya Verse In, I Mean U Still Have Time, I Just Wanna Get These Votes In

yo he new new in da game n kallin me out/
but ima win dis battle with outta doubt/
see its kinda hard ta take a easy/
when u battlin sum1 that u kno they rhymes is cheesy/

see u a lil suburban boi still bumin money from ya moms n pops/
im out on da street get shot at by cops/
i bin born on da block n raised in tha streets/
u n ya family eatin candy n sweets/

live where i live its gon b hard/
jus ta step outside u gon need a body guard/
now u livin ina ghetto ass home/
1 wrong move n its tha 44 chrome ta ya dome/

u cryin n begin ta get away/
but dis is tha ghetto wat kan i say/
ur life is wasted n ur gone for good/
but this is ur welcoming to tha real hood/

this is wat u get for kallin me out/
now jus remember wat im all about/
on tha east side we dunt play/
n this is y its ur las day

now u gon on tha stairs ta heaven/
all from that 187/
so now ya carers overr for good/
n all this is misunderstood/

so now b4 i let u go n think bout ur big mistake/
ill even stop n take a break..../
well now my breaks all over n its time to leave/
here sum advice dunt fuck wit me!!!/////////////

this is one of my worst battles ive ever writtin cuz im tired as shyt lol

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Voted For: Tha Flash

Tha Flash
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is decent.. flow fell off a little.. decent multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

CeRtIfIeDtHuG
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is pretty good.. flow falls off a little.. no multis.. no good wordplay.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
CeRtIfIeDtHuG had the better structure.. neither had a good flow.. neither had good personals.. Tha Flash had more multis.. better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Tha Flash gets my vote..

VOTE - THA FLASH

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Voted For: Tha Flash

this was a really close battle and its really hard to judge all categories were even and everything was good flow structure,etc.
but the one thing that stood out in my mind that seperated the winner from the loser in this battle was metaphores....and after reading the two verses over again i cam to the conclusion that Tha Flash took this one by a hair simply because the only thing that seperated them was metaphores and that what he had so my vote goes to..........

Vote: Tha Flash

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