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Old 08-31-04, 12:46 PM   #14
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

aight well no challenge here...better meta's,punches structure could use a bit of work but this was a 1 sided battle the whole way through vocab n wordplay were both evident in this verse....pretty good job....
other verse you gotta fix your structure n the way you put your bars down....

lyrikal pm me if your lookin ta get into a crew,im sure we could help you elevate you style......
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