Voted For: intensify effect

props to both battlers on this one but here's the verdict.

lil drew-lacked structured, but i see potential already though. i feel the strength behind the words, but there just weren't nice lyrics to intensify it. This was a simple effort, but i know you will elevate.

ie-decent verse, i ain't mad atcha. You had a definate, "This win is mine" swagger about you. This can sometimes be bad, or near fatal in battles. Fortunately you brought it though.

So if u think u can end my streak, u must be trippin be
Cuz tha last guy to take I.E out, wuz da doc that delivered me

that was a nice line and closer.

although no where near one of your nicest verses, i think you figured it wouldn't take much effort to get this one. So with better lyrics, punch, and structure, you get this one.

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