alright props to both battlers, but here's the verdict.
high tech-decent structure in this one, this was your plus in your verse.
with a nice line
stick his own head up his ass and watch him die from constipation~
but your downside, as is in many people's here is the corniness of certain lines.

the only thing this kid is packin is a bad hackin fuckin cough~
i bet he's lookin at my name rite now and startin to wack off~
i couldnt take this line seriously at all. try to come more serious, and nearly beef wit it.
so inhale exhale this massacre that u facen that str8 radiation~
like it was genocide it's eradication so put in your recomendation~
those lines didn't make sense. points off severely for that alone.

i-you came with decent structure. lyrically you guys are nearly the same. except you understand that you must come serious. And your verse, though small effort, was more serious to battling so this is why you got this one.

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