Voted For: mookie

props to both here's the verdict.

nomercy-
Ill spit a harder noun every time and then come out like I was victorious/
Cuz im a glorious motha fucka, prob scared you cuz I rap like notorious b.i.g/

this didn't seem to rhyme and it was your first two lines. This is bad, it makes a person want just to give you the L, since you came out not rhymin, or not making sense. your structure was bad throughout, and at other points you didn't rhyme

so for better structure, and only slightly better lyricism, mookie gets this one. elevation for you both though, no diss, keep at it.

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