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Old 09-01-04, 08:12 PM   #13
KISI
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Voted For: Ez-nyce

props to both battlers but here's the verdict.

phive, this is quite possibly the worst structure i have witnessed ever, no diss. there is no upside to this verse because, the structuring was bad, the lyrics/punches were bad. I had to read many lines twice, to realize they rhymed.
And it lacked seriousness.
ez nyce-you had much better structure. and you eclipsed him lyrically. but, this verse in itself, was average. however it did have some niceness to it like...
If rap was lik football I would b Paython Manning u would b lik Quincy Carter//
that was nice, and the second sports line, made the the line even better. This verse seemed to have a them to it with the sports references, i liked that.
so for better structure, lyricism, and all around better effort i give ez nyce this one.