Voted For: jewpride

alright, props to both. but here's the verdict

2pac-you had no structure on this whatsoever, take a look at jew's structure a little. People hate to have to search for where the rhyme is, and that's what i had to do, go back re-read, and see what rhymes with what, and this is bad. also the verse read like, a very amateur freestyle. like somebody was freestyling at a party, and sucked. No diss or beef at all, i'm just trying to help you elevate.

jewpride-simply by better structure you had this one. but in your short verse, you did have a shiner. which was the last one
my "confession"...when i take out the 4/5 ima let it "burn" like "usher"/
the line before it was a good connection to it, in terms of gun talk, i liked this line.

so for better structure, and punches, i voted jewpride

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