Voted For: shake-spear

alright, props to both here, but here's the verdict.

codee-good effort, i can see that you are new to this, just keep at it. the problem was rhyme scheme in this one. the third line had no following line to rhyme with it. you just jumped into a new rhyme. sometimes this is good to hear on a track if it is done right, but unfortunately in your case it was not done right. points off for that. The flow was jumbled, but your structure was decent.

shake-spear- you had this one on better punches and flow
yo ima be known as a hacker the way i break-"Codees"/(codes)
cause he still wouldnt win if he hacked into the system and changed-votes/

nice opener.
this verse wasn't spectacular, but it wasn't just average either, it waas a good all around verse

u should be happy u the "head" of somtin ur "Co" of "dee"'z-nuts/
great personal.
so with good punches, and personals, you get this one.

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