The hook was hot...I like the way you through the gun shots in there and shit. The lyrics to the song were there...it's just some stuff were off. Don't get me wrong, the point of the song was right there. Hands down...but you should have stopped and thought about a way to make your lines abit better. But your there and you got good ideas down. Return me the favor and tell me what you think bout my drop. I'm a Soldier.