Voted For: ProVerse

ProVerse
structure is good.. flow is on target.. tight multis.. imagery was decent.. could have been better, though the topic didnt allow for much.. emotion was pretty good.. like in the last line.. good shit.. this topic didnt allow you to go at it in a creative way, but u still managed it well..

flow2crazy
structure is good.. flow falls off a little.. u had a few multis.. imagery wasnt very good.. cause as i said previously, this topic doesnt allow for much.. u attempted to put in emotion, but it didnt come out right.. even though the topic couldnt get made into a creative way, u werent able to manage a dope verse..

Overall
Both had a good structure.. both had decent imagery.. ProVerse had the more stable flow.. more multis.. better emotion.. and he went about the topic better.. so basing off of that.. ProVerse gets my vote..

VOTE - PROVERSE