Yeh I thought this was iLL man, nice concept, nice rhythm, thought a coupla lines were off key and it was a bit short, but yeh im feeling this... The concept was understandable, you bought over a depth and some slight imagery, work on more metaphors and you will get more imagery and vividness across... The vocab was aight, seemed balanced sometimes, some knowledge words could be used though... The rhythm was something that caught my eye, it was clean, multies and internals shown and easily read, keep dropping man, make this into something a bit more interesting to read, drop a story or something... It was a decent and solid drop and look forward to seeing more of ya work... Keep elevating and spitting...

Peez...