illy fo' really
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IP:
Voted For: LEazy
I Give This One To LEazy ...
This Was A Nice Battle ...
Sindrome ... I Think You Need To Explain Ya Punches Coz Much Didn't Make Sence ... Like This One:
ill Leave You ~Weeping-As-You-Stall~ cos the "zzzzz" in ya name Got me ~Sleeping-in-This-Brawl~
~Peeping-Through-the-Wall~ at me is only Brilliance Youll See. Cos Only Time Your Hot ... Is the Times That You Were ME! /... (hahaha) (Don't Really Get Tha Second Line First Line was A Good Punch ... You Also Had Some Nice Multies But Most Didn't Fit In ... If You Gonna put Them In Make Sure They "Need" To Be There ...
LAezy ... Ya Structure Was A Lil Betta Than Sindrome's ... This Verse Was Mad Funny ... Punches were Strong And Connected ... Multies Were Tight (Lead Into Sum Good Punches) ... Nice Wordplay And Metas ... Ya Opener And Closer were Hot ... Closer Was Betta Though ... Nice Wordplay and Humour Is Always Good With Tha Reader ...
Sindrome Maybe You Should Add Sum Humour In ... Allways Goes Well ...
Vote: LEazy
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