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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
LEazy:
I think that u could have done a little better with your punchlines and your delivery. Your structure needs work, too. I did like the confederate flag punchline, but that was it.
ShottaBoy:
U had good punchlines, good delivery, but u could have worked a little on your structure. I felt like u came a little hard (u usually come hard 100%). I like the last two lines...those were tight.
U got my vote.
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