aight props to both battlers here. but here's the verdict.
flow
aramik
structure
aramik
vocab
aramik
punches
aramik
Seriousness
aramik
best line
aramik
"...It's like the days, before lent the way i'm passing over this fool."
worst line:
"...ya rhymes comin up shorter than an oompa loompa, so i'ma paint you orange and call you nick."
why:shotta your structure needed a lot of work, i found myself confused at first and this is never good. Some stuff didn't sound right together and things like that. and overall this verse just lacked creativity and seriousness, the nickelodeon reference, was bad and well chidish. But in truth paramik was only slightly better, but you guys were all well in the same boat. but paramik had better structure.