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Old 09-09-04, 07:33 PM   #34
Detrimental
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Voted For: System Crasher

System got this one.......he merked the fuck out ou......ya want beef with me cuz you talkin about me in ya verse....set a battle up bitch and Brad thinkin you can beat me this time? set a battle up

Punches-The most important thing of all.....simply you can see Crasher ook it....with Platinum's wack punches.....my grandma could weave that shit...it was weak

Wordplay- I liked Crashers a lot better.....Platinums whole verse was boring.....you can plinly see Crasher took this one

Mettas- Not to be all over Crashers dick but he got this too....don't get me wrong......both of you can elevate.....alwayz room for elevating....but Crasher took this

Structure- Both of your structures was good but Crashers was a little better

Flow- Crasher's verse flowed better than Platinum's did....but Crasher could elevate in this a lot......so can Platinum

Vocab- Platinum......you got this one......but Crasher's verse was all around better than yours....weak battle over all

V/ System Crasher

return the favor......here is the link to my battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=148164

just copy and paste that into your adress bar where you type www.whatever.com lol
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