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Old 09-12-04, 12:22 AM   #3
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wut up this was a pretty nice ass... drop froma new comer nice job...i really liked your wordplay..and you feelins... your emotions ...were really good..and i liked the way you described your situation..you had some nice structure ...but i think you shouldnt do those ' '' things they make your verse to crampt up..its not a battle verse... but overall nice drop..and keep it up...7.5/10
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