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Old 09-12-04, 01:50 PM   #11
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ay man that was pretty nice.i liked tha whole concept of it and u had some good wordplay. ya flow was alright i think it woulda been better with a hook on it and if u made it a lil longer but overall it was good. 7.5/10
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