yo, i was feelin' this for the subject part and some of the rhymes you carried it with, your rhymes were sorta simple, try and elevate you vocab, so rhyming or freestyling will be like breathing, its natural, madd respect for staying on the subject for two verses, i'll peep lack of logic and your 3rd verse when you release it, peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd