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and yer......nomercys rhymes wer way stretched..........but if u not dumb...ya can work round tht....try to see it how he was seein it..get into his flow...then ya can see the punches an stuff...wich were alot stronger........but mercy man...ya need to bring those lines down a lil......or structure it different...cos if kids cant follow it properly thye aint gon feel it..........jus positive feedback right there
and turban...u just need to work on wordplay and punches...which are the most important............pz
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