Im mos def feeling this, it had a sense of power, thought and you displayed your ideas well... The hook was catchy and the whole concept was hella detailed... The rhythm stayed on point, with a good use of multies, and the bars seemed nice to flow, it would be good in audio if you ever decide to spit it... The vocab was sharp and you showed your knowledge through it, it caught my eye throughout, working with the wordplay to bring out a sort of imagery and figuarative language, you kept everything in a balance which was good to see... I would like to collab with you, as you kinda spit the same style as me, holla at me... aim - emceerhetorix, msn - rhetorical_verses@hotmail.com, get at me...

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