**Yo,..this is a piece i wrote cause i know every emcee can relate to this...it's a true spittin' piece,and it's how i felt..it's basically telling people to learn to accept hip-hop cause we the "most chosen" music..and we'll live and burn on forever! Peep and reply! Oh,and this will appear on audio soon,..no doubt about it!**
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DeVine
Yo...We taken too serious,viewed as a style of destruction...
A rhyme function...seen to decoy the world into combustion...
Why we fussin'..we lose trust in those who deserve our attention...
Lyrical conventions...our approach seem like a thiefs intensions...
Our style arise questions..
thought process deceased to the world..we relapse on time...
Our style bound to expand minds..open brainwaves to extrordinary designs...
Step forward in movements..not backwards in rewind...
We define a proof to lyrical challenge...
Overall balance lies within' our hearts..not our talents...
So why we overviewed as delinquents lost like the mentally challenged...
Need to be heard as the new generation..just wit' rhymin' talents...

Chorus :
People overview us, why we gettin' put down...
We rock stages bringin' new sounds of underground...
People misunderstand us, view us as the enemie....
Concidered a friend to thee...we expand minds...like double "jeopardy"...

DeVine
From the streets i rose..people froze at how i now react when on my toes...
Instead of fightin' i put my words in rhyme tones...fight battles in flow...
My mind expandin..reachin' borders of unknown....
I was shown the light..not through vigilance,..but through digits in lyrical codes...
We a new study of world culture..
like Al Capone prone to deliver wrath upon these voltures..
World view hip hop as a bunch posers...
yet we seen on kids bedroom posters...
Our music hot like toasters...
burn charts till they closen then reopen..
If we bad why's our music "most chosen"...
is it our style...or is it our clothin'...
Whatever sells...we the one's keepin' musical brain cells flowin'.....

Chorus :
People overview us, why we gettin' put down...
We rock stages wit' a new sound of underground...
People misunderstand us, view us as the enemie....
Concidered a friend to thee...we expand minds... like double "jeopardy"...

DeVine
People criticize us....why they victimize us...
What we do wrong? We just glamorized this....
A new way of musical taste...
People sayin' we a musical disgrace..
We oversee them..fit in our place...
We ain't all about guns,drugs,and violence,...we just sheddin' real life taste...
Put in minds to phaze..the worries in our place..
So don't judge on what we say..instead listen to the inner story...
May see the message we deliver...a lifestyle warnin'...
Judge us if you like...we know we speek it right...
Message within' the words...you judged us by sight...
Why not listen to what we say..you may prove yourself wrong..
To you we're the enemie..to us we the messanger through lyrics and song....
You tellin' hip hop to be gone...our style burn forever in underground as we live on....

Chorus :
People overview us, why we gettin' put down...
We rock stages wit' a new sound of underground...
People misunderstand us, view us as the enemie....
Concidered a friend to thee...we expand minds... like double "jeopardy"...
(Beat fades out.....)

~Get at me wit' feedback or criticism...Thanks!~
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DeVine
~Mind Theoriez~
*Reppin' Till The Day I Die*

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pretty good i thought that a couple of the lines were a little long and it hurt the flow in spots because of this besides that it had a good use volcab and all that

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Im mos def feeling this, it had a sense of power, thought and you displayed your ideas well... The hook was catchy and the whole concept was hella detailed... The rhythm stayed on point, with a good use of multies, and the bars seemed nice to flow, it would be good in audio if you ever decide to spit it... The vocab was sharp and you showed your knowledge through it, it caught my eye throughout, working with the wordplay to bring out a sort of imagery and figuarative language, you kept everything in a balance which was good to see... I would like to collab with you, as you kinda spit the same style as me, holla at me... aim - emceerhetorix, msn - rhetorical_verses@hotmail.com, get at me...

Peez...

Yo,..preciate the replies...yeah this is a definite imagery type piece that every emcee should be feelin'. This will be put on audio soon,..i'm working on a new beat for it now. So definitly expect to see it! Rhetorix,..hit me up on my IM name which is RecoveryMan01 and we'll talk business....I'ma peep your shit now! Yo,..true Emcees really need to stop sleepin' on this shit!...Up'n this piece

DeVine
~Mind Theoriez~
*Reppin' Till The Day I Die*

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Up'n this piece

syke nah, i was feelin this peice, kinda powerful just touch up flow, 1luv.

kinda amtuerish flow got burt alot could definatley do a holw lot better but that why we have practice...rite?....check out im back(bitch)

this was all around dope. mad internal rhyme scheme. good wordplay. very postive content and ya stayed on focus threw out the entire peice, and that was jaw droppin with the amount a verses ya threw in this peice. ya title was right, i defintly did feel this.

joey