Heh.. Wasnt bad. Could use more wordplay, flow was 'ok' nothing great. You have potential and I did enjoy reading that drop for the most part. The idea was pretty good but its been done to death, it's always fun trying out new avenues of thought. Anyways 95% of the negative feedback you get is either dickriding (in battles) or people who dont like you for some odd reason or another or b/c you're better then they are. And 95% of those are under the age of 13 and I ignore them anyways. (you can pin point these young kids with there exsesive foul language, bitching, bad grammer). You'll rarely come across true feedback where someone speaks their mind about your peice and leave good in-depth suggestions to you. Peace.

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