Voted For: BANG

This one wasnt hard for me to pick a winner. Im just gunna tell you both were you went wrong/what I liked straight up...

Legend...
Pros:
-Good Structure
-Used maximum line count
Cons:
-Talked about pac waaay too much (I especially didnt like how you talked about pac shooting your opponent...not right)
-Lines 3-4 were stupid
-Your punches were not hittin hard
-No personals (coulda used your verse against anyone)
-Vocab sucked

Bang...
Pros:
-Hard opener punch, haha
-Good wordplay
-Pretty good structure
-Used pretty close to maximum line limit also
-Nice metas
Cons:
-Some lines were sketchy (way longer than the rhyming line)
-More personals were needed (only used 1 in opener)
-If in any battle your guna spit about beating your opponent up in real life or sum, only safe way to do that is with clever wordplay instead of bein so upfront about it, just not effective
(louisville line)

As you can tell from the way ive critiqued you both above,
^^^Bang in my honest opinion took this one...Elevation is needs for both in the "cons" area. Props to both, peace...