The Original Half Ass King
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
Overall not such a bad battle, but ill do into detail so I can decide who the real champ here is...
Opener - Ex, mattee's was super weak
Closer - Matte, Ex's wasnt a punch
Punches - Ex, made more sense than most of Mattee's
Personals - Neither had any
Metas - Neither had any again
Multies - Ex, for actually usin a couple in his opener
Structure - Ex, Mattee's was unorganized
Vocab - Ex, Mattee's was elementary
Wordplay - Neither, nothin special
Creativity - Ex, for the more creative verse
As you can see from above, ^^^ Ex took this one without any real problems. Both fo you could use some elevating, whatever you didnt get your name in above, ^^^
You should both be looking at those areas for improvment next time.
Props to both for dropping, no hate, just honest feedback/vote in my opinion, peace...
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