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6 - 10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 02:57 AM

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~{ExClusive}~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 03:18 AM.

This is my last time I challenge a wack herb like this guy…
Matee1 is always jealous cuz I drive by in my cady cuz im supa-fly/
Everytime you choose a battle you choose to lose, whata bad selection…
You better hit up a crew soon but probly you’ll just get hit back with rejection/
I always hit better words when I rhyme, they always make people look frustrated…
This battle was already over before it started cuz yer rhymes are seriously under-related/
This is another un rated faggot, that dosent even know how to spit with more sensation…
I already won cuz this faggot has nothing on me cuz I got tunes of admiration/

man where are you, you ducker!

MATTEE1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-04 12:10 AM.

EXCLUSIVE look at diss lil kid, u could b tryin givenaway free tracks on E-BAY and still no BID//ur shit u spittin's lika a mosqueto pest u just cant get RID//i'll stab you all over ur body with LYRICAL swords//slit ur fucken throat, as a vatality and hide ur body under loose floorboards//im hittin shit straight at ur fucken head//and im not talkin hittin or shootin you with LEAD//its gunna be a LYRICAL war assualt, you couldnt get ur shit high even if u were hoisten'en them with a pole VAULT...

yo uppin i want this a KO (at school)

Voted For: MATTEE1

whack battle ..

MATTEE1's punches came a little harder ... by looking at the structure Excl looked like he obviously won this one... but no

both verse flowed ... ok but Mattee barely took this one

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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

Overall not such a bad battle, but ill do into detail so I can decide who the real champ here is...

Opener - Ex, mattee's was super weak
Closer - Matte, Ex's wasnt a punch
Punches - Ex, made more sense than most of Mattee's
Personals - Neither had any
Metas - Neither had any again
Multies - Ex, for actually usin a couple in his opener
Structure - Ex, Mattee's was unorganized
Vocab - Ex, Mattee's was elementary
Wordplay - Neither, nothin special
Creativity - Ex, for the more creative verse

As you can see from above, ^^^ Ex took this one without any real problems. Both fo you could use some elevating, whatever you didnt get your name in above, ^^^
You should both be looking at those areas for improvment next time.
Props to both for dropping, no hate, just honest feedback/vote in my opinion, peace...

Could you please leave an honest vote/feed on my battle as I have just done for the both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=150670

Thanks a lot, peace....

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

exclusive won this battle,
heactually hit this kid but it was an extra weak battle,
comon eclusive ive seen better

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^ya i have done better but look at this guy im battling hes a joke im one fo the best young guys on this site soon ill get battlin better guys

Uppin

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

this guy is should get Ko'ed Ex just out played dis cat real fuckin bad i cant wait to see the end of it it should be 5-0 and it better be k heres what i came up with
Exclusive: he pretty much took this but still needs some wordplay in there but hes got it a bit but his vocab and everything was more played then the other guy battle was won by exclusive
Matte1: you seriously need lots of help you got worked so bad yer stucture is off yer vocab is off yer everything like fuck thesae people who think there good for wha tive heard ex is fuckin doep and hes 12 holy look at diss guy hes fuckin dope for his age even if he was 15,14,13 he would be dope
vote: exclusive

Voted For: MATTEE1

ima go wit mattee jus better over all, better wordplay better personals, i mean damn exclusive said under-related? and still says this dood is a herb? damn i dont kno any one who says herb any more cept when they talkin bout trees....so theres my vote

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