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bang weak verse, the punches didnt hit and some lines u werent even rhyming them or didnt make sense or they were played ex. the line with fuckin ur moms everyday and fuck wit me u get bitchslapped,etc. its played should get a little more creative if ur gonna write those type of lines
lyrical had some good punches and some were weak but overall it was a descent verse for this battle and put it up better, better flow, most words rhymed and punches hit harder then bangs
no hate honest vote good luck
peace
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