i agree with sum of wat N said........... turn ur lyrics up alil............. and sum lines u do mumble and they seem rushed, but juss keep recordin it untill u get it right....... i heard ur chorus and most of ur lines and understood em, so that wasnt a problem for me, but u might wanna improve ur quality with the level of ur vocals and makin sure u dont mumble............ besides that it was better then 70% of the people rappin on this site.......

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