This had some real shit it . But I kind of lost focus on it.No hate.But if a peice keep's me from what's happening around me I no it's good. But while reading this I started talking to some1 in my house and lost interest.But that's just me. It may apeill to other's.
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niggas who choked before thoudands of peeps and strived
i even have people spreading hearsays saying I can't rap for life
you never know how much each word hurts when it is been said
cause deep inside theres a inner scar wounding all our confidence
all along i know each humble rappers has got something to say
. This shit is dope. It isnt rhyming all that well but who care's. These word's you wrote are real man . ......Should consider going sudio with it. That way you can get the feeling out .Showing that it isnt allway's about rhyming. ..............good drop man....pz