Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

Ok, this was a close one. Both of you had good structure and punches, and some nice wordplay too. Lady Fiya I liked your opener, but the 3rd and 4th lines didn't really hit that hard. The next 2 lines were good, nice personal too, and I like the way you played off his name Datruth. Then your closer I wasn't too satisfied with. It was set up like it was gonna hit hard, but you could've used a lot more things than "rakin' ice" to make the line more effective. Sonofisis your opener was aight, nothing too special, but you made up for it with the next bar, with a good play off the whole "dutchess of metaphors" thing. The next bar about Princess Diana was the highlight of your verse, good job there. The next 2 bars were alright, the "gasonline" line could've been better I felt but it didn't really take anything away from your verse. You closer was aight too, as your last line is a little old, but the line about kidnapping her weave made me laugh.
Vote - ~Sonofisis~

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