The Original Half Ass King
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Voted For: ~Sonofisis~
Lady, you said at the bottom of your verse that you did the max of 8 bars, you only did lines, 8 bars is 16 lines, not hatin just wanted to make sure you knew..anyways...
Opener - Sono, Lady seemed to be trying to rhyme too hard which threw off the whole opener, (didnt make much sense)
Closer - Sono, hit hard, nice closer, ladys again was kinda wack but not too bad, just didnt hit as hard
Punches - Sono, his verse was longer which alloud him to throw more of his hard punches
Personals - Lady, she actually had some alright ones whereas sono didnt really use any
Metas - Tie, both verses had equally hard metas that were used
Multies - Lady, she tried to use some in there unlike sono didnt have any
Structure - Sono, I like verse better when theres only your verse and thats it, makes it neater and easier to read, Lady had stuff onto and underneith her verse
Vocab - Lady, more complex verse than sonos
Flow - Sono, I was feeling your flow, Ladys was kind of off cause some of the larger words didnt fit in
Creativity - Tie, I think both verses were equally creative as you both used 1 link each within your verse and both had some kool ideas to spit about
Overall, as you can see above, sonofisis took this one. Althought it was a pretty good battle, you can only have one winner and im sure the votes will show that sonofisis took this one, Lady, elevate on structure/flow of your verse, yours was good but if it Props to both, no beef, just an honest vote in my opinion, payce..
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