wow!! This is not to good at all.But you must no that seen as the title's "just goofing off". This has simple rhyme's in it, The flow isnt really there.Those explanation's in bracket's sort of fuck's thing's up while reading it. If you need to use explanation's put them at the end of your peice.Also the rhyme's are in bold .This isnt nessacerily a bad thing but if your rhyming and flowing nice you dont have to make your rhyme's stand out.We will be able to see were they are..but overall I would give this a 5/10... Keep elevating and you should be sweet...........pz