Voted For: e-dubz

E-dubs...

ima rape this bitch........ and he wont hesitate to recieve it
cuz when im done grand on his knees like hes prayin for jesus
decent...

i suggest throwin in the white flag before you get wrecked
20grand like pictures just takin, he aint even developed yet
ha nice punch....

dubz could ruin the average rap..... from the averge cat
im strapped wit tight sixteens like church shoes on shaq
set up was decent follow up was preety good....

picked apart yo lines, still cant find a punch.. u not perfection
ur flow grimey but inconsistant like tryin to piss wit erections
eeewww... preety good ending not a bad verse all around good... 8.0

next...

Im gonna have to ask you to leave, i know its darastic//
But ur a disease, you make the mother fuckn "class sick"//
ha nice opener/personal...

Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth//
Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"//
set up was eeeh even thou i get it, follow up was decent but played concept......

Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft//
Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"//
oo.. why i aint think of that one??? good punch...

You couldnt beat me man, if u were the father rhyme//
"watch" kid ur broken, battled me at the wrong "time"/
ending was weak..... u could of end it better then that...

after i read e-dubs verse i thought it was preety good then i read 20 grand verse and i thought half way down that he might have te win then i read the weak ending and was like WHA!!..... u cant be serious.... 1 played concept to go along with it.....

but had one good punch plus 1 good personal *opener*

all u need it was one more.....

preety tight battle N was well worth my read but im a go with e-dubs on this one cue to less-weakness showing in the verse........