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Old 10-01-04, 10:30 AM   #14
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Voted For: Nostradamus

lmao....haha...this was funny....nostradamus...aight verse..some aight punches...some nice personals...u had a lil wordplay too...structure and flow was good....overall an aight verse...

thuglife....the structure and flow was prolly the worst ever....the lines are like 5 wordz each..then they a big uck off one in the middle..poor structure..flow was bad...didnt really make sense..no hard punches..if any...u need to elevate big time...why accept to battle him..u know u wa gona get crushed...and u prolly aint learned from tht 1 lil bit...step ya game up man....pz
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