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Voted For: TitoBronsky
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tito:nice flow to this verse, i like the "can't grow skills on a farm kid",now he wanna be hard shit" line, nice punches from then on, lyrically wise you were creative with your punches,and your vocabulary was good, i like the rat lines you used, nice assonance in that multie, the "starving for beef",start carving emcee",line was good as well, nice way to end this as well, you showed that you have an original style, this would sound good in audio, but you should try to acquire personals as well....nice job
skillz:your verse was good as well, but it seemed some of the punches were played a bit, like the michael jackson punch,janet jackson punch,,hmm, but i liked the opener, good start, nice overall verse..
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