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Check in by: 10-02-04 at 12:39 PM

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skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 12:40 PM.

i was born ready this battle you betta not attempt/
anytime i'll blaze ya in my LONG JOHNS my gun is SILVER it'll turn u into shrimp/(long john silver)
after i'm done wit u i'll leave u layed like yo bed sheet covers/
u will neva be able to see me like the eyes of stevie wonder/
ima gangsta i'll leave u the same color of my crip set i'll leave u cold/
end up wit wit yo chest open like janet at the super bowl/
you should already know u applying to this battle is wrong/
cause once u reply i'll easily BEAT IT like michael jackson's song
it might take you a long time before u reply to this battle man/
this win is going to be rounded up like u waz some farmer's cattle man/
after im done youll cheat and turn into a biter like mike(tyson)
wit the beam i'll pull u out of the crowd like the show PRICE IS RIGHT/

there im done ur turn awaits......

TitoBronsky has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 03:18 AM.

skills like a life you lacking, what kinda knife you packing?
that shits commical now im through laughing
only jesus saves and Halloweens 4 weeks away
we meet today, see the maker in a different grey
you cant grow skills on a farm kid...
This cat grew up milking cows now he wanna be hard shit!
I didnt enter this forum upon bordom
Came to bring pain like needles in feinds on Fordham
i skin a rat and sport 'em..... you feed a rat and spoil 'em
give them cheese, till they grow up ripe for boiling
you are what you eat and im starving for beef
imma disarm your weapon, and start carving emcee
Your half hearted decrees of lyricism with ease
are dismissed before you spit or breath
I'll punch a hole through the side of your face
in a fit of violence and rage,then watch as your body decays

Voted For: TitoBronsky

lol skills wack opener stevie wonder bars are wayyyyy played the janet line blah no punches or disses hit flow and structure was ok vocab decent not a strong verse 3/10
tito madd multis and a ill flow here punches werent strong but they were way stronger then skills were disses were decent also stucture was ok also pretty decnt shit here basically you had a better verse with stronger punches and nice multis good fucking shit 7/10

return my honest vote both of you

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Voted For: TitoBronsky

ok~
tito:nice flow to this verse, i like the "can't grow skills on a farm kid",now he wanna be hard shit" line, nice punches from then on, lyrically wise you were creative with your punches,and your vocabulary was good, i like the rat lines you used, nice assonance in that multie, the "starving for beef",start carving emcee",line was good as well, nice way to end this as well, you showed that you have an original style, this would sound good in audio, but you should try to acquire personals as well....nice job
skillz:your verse was good as well, but it seemed some of the punches were played a bit, like the michael jackson punch,janet jackson punch,,hmm, but i liked the opener, good start, nice overall verse..

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Voted For: TitoBronsky

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Voted For: skillz

easy battle. skillz all tha way on this one... better punches, personals, structure... tito had more multis but thats it... both yall need to elevate but tito you need the most help... just elevate hommie cause thats what it takes... elevate on punches and wordplay the most... no hate tho cause i know your new here. good verse by both but skillz takes this one...

VOTE- SKILLZ

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