my vote: Preminition

verse flowed well, and was easy to follow... some decent punches in there........ the "certified' punch was clever...
and as far as certified thug..... very angry verse...... and played lines..... you cant do physical harm with words and it came across like thats what you were trying to do..... which is cool..... but your technique ...... there was no followable structure to it what so ever.....

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'