Battle Rules:

8lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
u spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 05:41 PM

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Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 05:44 PM.

CeRtIfIeDtHuG has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 05:50 PM.

u won't do audio cos ya voice is like ya losses...'treble' ya wins....(high)
n why u wack?...cos ur structure like listed ingrediants on food tins....
like 'raw meat' this 'beef' will make you hurt 'inside'...leave u mortified...
ur a 'thug'....but only 15 so what happens if a film is 'certified'?...(18)
dajarvu like this a similar 'scenario'...cos you gettin the same outcome...*
with all the battles u losin...no wonder ya favourite song is "how~come"....


*just got merked by scenario


there it is, 5 min drop leavin u well n truely merked...

ima murda u wit tha way that i spit..take ya chick,she gonna slay tha dick,thin im go hard n raw n ya ladies clit/

see homie im not tha person u wanna fuck wit/
cuz im da nigga that come hard n spit that hot shit/

ima like a US bomber dropin bombs on ya ass/
i got news for ya dawg in dis race u comin in last/

well u tried ta b hard n do ya best/
but my words r like aks rippin threw ya vest///

iight man uppin dis shyt comon yall il return a honest vote

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Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

aiight this was a pretty weak battle....
opener - thug
closer - preminition
flow - thug
punchez - thug
vocab - preminition
v/ thug, just barley though man prem sum ur linez didnt make sence this is no hate, just how i saw tha battle.

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

HAHA..GETTIN BETTER MULTIZ WAS HOT N THA FIRST LINE

PUNCHES GETTIN STRONGER STRUCTURE GOOD KEEP ELIVATIN HAVE STRONGER DISSES

/V CT

Voted For: Premanition

ima murda u wit tha way that i spit..take ya chick,she gonna slay tha dick,thin im go hard n raw n ya ladies clit/
^ Wow, hella stretched and weak.

see homie im not tha person u wanna fuck wit/
cuz im da nigga that come hard n spit that hot shit/
^ No real punch here

ima like a US bomber dropin bombs on ya ass/
i got news for ya dawg in dis race u comin in last/
^ Pretty weak punch

well u tried ta b hard n do ya best/
but my words r like aks rippin threw ya vest///
^ Weak Weak closer

Now for Prem

u won't do audio cos ya voice is like ya losses...'treble' ya wins....(high)
n why u wack?...cos ur structure like listed ingrediants on food tins....
^ Aight opener, second line sucked'

like 'raw meat' this 'beef' will make you hurt 'inside'...leave u mortified...
ur a 'thug'....but only 15 so what happens if a film is 'certified'?...(18)
^ Hehe, pretty nice punch

dajarvu like this a similar 'scenario'...cos you gettin the same outcome...*
with all the battles u losin...no wonder ya favourite song is "how~come"....
^ Lmfao, I liked the closer



Basically Premonition was way elevated over certified. HIs punches were harder and better. He also flowed better. Stay Up

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man i fuckin hate front lines.....you fuckin newb voters....every line he dropped was played as hell....blinkz if ya don't get lines wiv complexity i don't know how the fuck u 5-0.....pm me bout any of them or ask me here n i'll explain them for ya...

uppin some real votes....

am i moanin?......yeah i fuckin am cos front lines is pissin me off

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Voted For: Premanition

Premanition got this one, better structure and nice punches. I like how u brought up one of his other battles and used it, kinda played it, but it stayed connected.
Certified, u need to elevate kause tha whole "self glorification" lines are played and old unless u have a record to back it

no beef, juss facts

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Voted For: Premanition

certified lol why you battle this guy?he merked you and you know we madd cool so im gonna give you the truth cuz lieing wont help you elevate you had no good punches here at all and structure was streched as fuck all over good vocab and flow was ok i think you have madd potential with a little work.premanation good ass punches got you this here lol at the film certififed line and his structure does look like the listed ingredients lol dope shit here good structure and good flow as well ender was dope also nice shit all around good vocab and flow was dope you get the vote.

both of yall hit my battles up with a honest vote

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my vote: Preminition

verse flowed well, and was easy to follow... some decent punches in there........ the "certified' punch was clever...
and as far as certified thug..... very angry verse...... and played lines..... you cant do physical harm with words and it came across like thats what you were trying to do..... which is cool..... but your technique ...... there was no followable structure to it what so ever.....

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