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atlas the vagabond
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IP:
Voted For: fluidmoon
props to both lyricists on this one, good battle but here's the verdict
flow:empire
seriousness:fluid
punches:fluid
structure:fluid
vocab:empire
verdict:Empire your strong points were some of the lines you spit, had some cleverness to it. But the feeling i got about this verse is that it lacked intensity, and was a lil dry. was a good use of personals, but it just seemed run of the mill from you, and i know you could come harder.
Fluids off top had intensity in it, which i respect, when you battle no matter how many times you've done it, you have to continue to come raw, which she did. Also i liked her structure better, although it wasn't a lot better, i liked it better. So for better intensity, and hunger i'm giving this one to Fluidmoon. Good battle you guys.
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