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Old 10-04-04, 10:58 AM   #14
Ice Pick
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Vote J dot

Harder hitting punches and better use of wordplay....

Even if you made the biggest loogy, you still couldnt spit
Your wack lines are limited…like cell phone minutes
Could have hit harder if worded different

you'll get cut off in a instant, you’re a Lyrical “Chaos"
5-0 means I owned you, just call me boss
This was good

I’ll turn you into my slave, like the roots of ya kins
Even with yo copied lines, you couldnt a win
Descent
Don’t make me expose you to these folks, I had second thoughts
I got connects on RV, I’ll watch yo little ass rot
Good


L havok too strecthed and played punhces, i though you would have come harder but i guess not.....

he can connect wires and flip the switch...but still wont see the light//--1
shows his verse has no power behind it...technically he's outta sight//--2
This started off dumb and ended ok

compare our might, in physics his skills are grounded...while mine are outta sight//--3
claim to beat me is like peasents say they're god...you just dont have the right//--4
didnt like that how you used outta sight like that 2 times

im in this fight, call you an oreo the way your black...yet you talk and write white//--5
your underwear is on too tight, if ya wanted to lose ya virginity..shoulda slept at M.J's Last night//--6
this was wack and plain ole stupid.....
probably lost the battle for you

Be more creative both of you


he can connect wires and flip the switch...but still wont see the light//--1
shows his verse has no power behind it...technically he's outta sight//--2
compare our might, in physics his skills are grounded...while mine are outta sight//--3
claim to beat me is like peasents say they're god...you just dont have the right//--4
im in this fight, call you an oreo the way your black...yet you talk and write white//--5
your underwear is on too tight, if ya wanted to lose ya virginity..shoulda slept at M.J's Last night//--6

Vote J DOt

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