WOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWW...


i honestly cannot express the Words that i feel towards this piece..

but all i can say is... ONE LOVE MAMA...

you definitely have aquired the skills of a writer... i used to see you post around here and never really took the time to watch you progress... bu wow.. you have come A LONG WAY..


the scheme was there... the pattern was there... the stroyline followed sweet.. and truth is.... ITS REAL... this is another story of a ghetto reporter...


I would consider it an honor if you took a moment to peep my piece and tell me what you feel as i admire critique from writers of your caliber.


I felt this piece and not only cuz im kissing ass...or new... because im not... i am a writer by blood and could careless about public opinion. i write on my vision. my eyes are televisions that i spit on.


OVERALL...


5/5


TOP NOTCH.