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Old 10-05-04, 12:51 PM   #20
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Voted For: Ice Pick

aight...ok battle here...ice pick...good verse....vocab was good...u had some nice wordplay and the punches came quite hard..some alright personals in thurr aswell..flow was ok...structure was ok..overall....decent verse...

yvonne....another ok verse....altho..i dont think ya punches were has hard...but u came wit the more personals...u just need to add stronger punches in thurr....increase ya vocab aswell...ya structure and flow was good too...overall ok verse

this was an ok battle...but punches take it every time so amna av to go wiv ice pick....

my vote=ice pick
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