Voted For: Elusiv G
aight...long fuckin battle ere....da quite one...ur verse structure was all over.....the only thing tht made it the slightliest bit easy to read was the multis....but u did have some ok punches...a lil wordplay...not much...couldnt get any flow from it......work out ya structure and u shud be ok.....and throw harder punches man...overall...ok verse...
elusiv...u had a better verse..flow and structure was better altho ya lines varied a lil...but ur punches were deffo harder...some ok wordplay again......there were no major personals in either verse but like i say..u took it wit the punches...no hate...pz to both...
my vote=elusiv g
return the favour wit an honest vote plz....
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