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Old 10-05-04, 06:14 PM   #11
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Voted For: str8_hood

aight....str8 takes this.......cos his second and hird barz were punches tht hit....decent verse from u.....expand ya vocab and throw harder punches u be good....flow and structure was good....and u had wordplay in ya punches wich i like.......overall....decent verse...

x-on..aight verse...but the punches didnt connect...they were punches...but its like they was nuthin to them..add a lil wordplay...altho ur vocab was alot better.....get ya structure and punches right...u be good too....overall..ok verse...

ma vote=str8 hood

no hate....pz
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