appreciate the comments... thanks kmfrob for noticing the the vocab... i feel that... but on the same token, i feel that if this was like on a track... it could be understood... many faces could feel it..if i take it to some next level with the vocab.. which can be done in a re-write, then id be appealing to the "underground masses"... you know, maybe it might be a good idea to write the same piece in an "underground format" .... well see...