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Old 10-06-04, 07:20 PM   #10
Technical
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From: -The Ring-
This was feedback posted for selah david

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yo sorry but both of u need to elevate. wat are yall newbies or sumthin? yo selah ur structure and flow is poor and take off den slashes dawg dats played out, certified thug, i expected betta from u, ur flow was off as well as ur vocab. both need to elevate (no hate)